A Very Sad Chinese Story

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NoJustNo

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A Very Sad Chinese Love Story:


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I almost cried,
especially when she said: 攣散散戻
VERY Sad
 
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This story is so stupid..
no taste of creativity
the whole storyline the whole fucking plot contradicted itself at the end....
nothing interesting at all
alot of clichés seriously fucking alot of clichés
a horrible taste of drama
too many Linguistic Mistakes
Story needs more characters... and good roles instead of just characters opening and closing conversations back and forth between them this is not a fucking Dialogue..
why would she say 攣散散戻 ??? seriously every fucking story everyone wrote they always think of that.... why won't they think of something else?
most of this story is just copied from other ,popular,well known, valuable,honorable splendid and stupendous stories..
this story really does not have any value and should not be posted here.
the writer will be sued for copying titanic.

i suggest we remove this thread and ban [member=23286]NoJustNo[/member]

[member=2]0x688[/member] [member=6677]TH3RM4L[/member] [member=111]springfield[/member] [member=60]Opcode.eXe[/member] Do it.. ban him.  :face_palm: :face_palm:

Like my post so i can see how many people agree with me.
 
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You copyed my idea, fuck u and ur life, bullshit.
This story it was not so sad, even a dog will NOT give a shit for it.
 
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